These images are usable, but they mainly need to look brighter and cleaner. Based on the feedback, the most helpful edits are:

• Raise overall exposure/brightness so the room feels more inviting.
• Lift shadows/darks, but keep true blacks from going flat.
• Increase highlights/lights carefully without blowing out the strip lights.
• Adjust white balance slightly cooler to reduce the warm artificial cast, but don’t push it so far that the room looks overly blue or “sterile.”

The goal is a brighter, neutral-looking interior while preserving detail in the lighting fixtures.

If you can reshoot, that may help more than heavy editing. Interiors are difficult because our eyes adapt to mixed/artificial light better than the camera does. On a reshoot, focus on getting a brighter exposure and more accurate white balance in-camera, while protecting the brightest lights from clipping. A tripod and careful composition will also help.

So: start with exposure and white-balance corrections in post, and if the files still feel too dim or muddy, go back and reshoot with a brighter, more controlled setup.